Slick - Lost Light (W.I.P)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sammy Dexcell, Jul 17, 2009.

  1. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    Dark eery Liquid??? :confused:

    Listen here

    Been doin this on n off the last couple days an im now stuck!!
    Fruity has just begun to crackle too so any ideas or feedback would be muchly appreciated!!

    Safe!
     
  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Love the looow sub, makes the tune a little heavier. Sounds great so far. For me you could add some nasty dark bits (yes please), or go a little more ambient (if you have to)
    Quite brooding at the minute. Hope you finish it.
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    the mix sounds nice
     
  4. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    Thats tearin it up man!
    Love the intro pads and fx.
    sub is bad!
    Like the panning around 1:13, I'll look forward to the full version
     
  5. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    Safe for the comments ppl! Really appreciate it guys!
    I was thinkin the same sub, maybe some more dirty noises an some 808s :confused: thats if fruity can take it lol
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    do it bro! running low on tha cpu then lol
     
  7. deadaelus

    deadaelus Laughter in the Slaughter

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    Maybe a bit more low end, as break says there can never be enough bass in a track.

    Pretty much just need to finish (easier said than done) by adding some nice drum fills or a subdued vocal to break it up and create a bit more variety

    Maybe a couple tearing bass stabs.

    Other than that sounding good
     
  8. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    Too many unnecessary effects n vst's on the go! got loads of Cpu! Im just bein lazy an not exportin stuff!

    Thanks for the feedback thats exactly wat i needed to hear might try find some vox to give me more inspiration an make some more stabs, nice one!
    Cheers to all that have checked it so far! :2thumbs: