I like the sound your going for and as its a WIP it could be nice track.... im not sure what the problem is though it all sounds distorted... kick snare seem very harsh for the liquid vibe imo id change those to something more subtle ie the kick a nice low end one. synth wise i like the sound of it. going back a little to why this sounds distorted mabye a case of too much going on at same time when i feel its doing the song no favours. give us less elements all at once more sub and work on eq the synths mabye filter the synths in out. ideas are all there just not executed very well imo keep at it.
