i like the vocal sample u are using and the mood of the track!
But i am wondering your username is "snaredrum" but in the track especially the snare is very quiet and could get a lot of more punch, f.e. in the high freqs.
Also i think some open hihats or cymbals would fit very good!
Also i miss a small part where all the synth are muted and the drums run alone ... maybe that would give some more variety to this track.
But this is just my subjective opinion