Yeah sounds good to me nice creapy sustained synth on the intro love all the incidental noises and the bass is nice & nasty, some really good little pauses. Think the percussion on the intro could do with more reverb/delay or something. Seems to end a bit wierdly, I think it could have a longer atmospheric outro.
Loving the overall tone of the track. Nothing seems out of place and the flow is quite nice. The drums you currently have are great though I think more drums (breaks etc) would really add depth to the track. I think this track has a lot of potential to be something.