It's not bad but there's a few things kind of bugging me about it. Not mad about the snare sound being used. It sounds a bit flat and tinny, think it needs more low end on it. And I'd probably use that vocal sample that you have in it a bit less, but I presume you'll probably end up doing that yourself as the track develops. Don't really like that synth that comes in at th 53s mark. Just doesn't sound right to me.