Signus - Paradigm

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Signus, Apr 19, 2012.

  1. Signus

    Signus New Member

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    It's minimal, it's a bit dark and it has some lovely eastern tribalistic percussion in there, just for good measure.

    I hope you like it, and if you don't I welcome all feedback and constructive criticism! Help me better the music!



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  2. felun

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    you are right its lovely, could maybe use some variance? but generally nice!
     
  3. ali^

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    sounds like you've got all the basics down man, sounds like a really nice chilled tune. perhaps the mixdown is a tiny bit thin in places i.e. snare but i think it's what the tune needs really. good effort, my critisism would be try and add a few more interesting elements here and there just to keep it fresh throughout. good work
     
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    nice sample in the intro creating a nice vibe

    mixdown sounds pretty crisp, personally i would give the snare a little more punch, a slight low end boost maybe
    also i think the bass could maybe come up a touch in relation to the synths

    nice track mate vibes