Sid Fidla James - Fight The Machines - Jump up (WIP)

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  1. Sid Fidla James

    Sid Fidla James Member

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    Just so folk dont think im dead, lol. Thought i'd better post something.

    Been having big computer problems recentley, hence name of the track.

    Thought I'd give you all a listen.

    Feedback appreciated.

    Hope ya enjoy

    http://soundcloud.com/sfjgts/fight-the-machines
     
  2. Fishy:)

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    Well i wish there was an intro:)
    The track sounds pretty well made man:p
    gets boring fast tho
     
  3. Sid Fidla James

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    Cheers dude.
    Not suprising it gets a bit boring atm. Didn't realise it was 4min till I saw it on soundcloud. lol.
    Im only gonna use 64 bars of it in the end, just experimenting with different versions in 1 long line with this mixdown.
    Cheers for the feedback though dude.
     
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    pretty repetitive and seems a bit too busy , also you commented on how you think the sub needs turning down when its not even made my sub flex what so ever.
     
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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    feedback on soundcloud mate!
    I think it's a bit busy too, you always have like 3 or 4 basses going on, keeping 2 at the same time playing would work fine too imo :)
    anyway if i ever heard this at a club I'd go nuts
     
  6. Sid Fidla James

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    cheers dude.
    as said before, think im only gonna use the best 64 bars from this, build rest of tune around it.
    fingers crossed computer will hold out :S
     
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    pretty manic beat, some squelchy and dirty sounds lol
    very repetitive tho, a good tune if ur off ur face in a club tho

    id say with an intro, build up and a bit more variation this would be a mad tune.
     
  8. Sid Fidla James

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    Cheers dude.
    Trying to do an intro for it at moment.
    Ended up starting 2 new tunes instead though. lol.
    Think it will need a vocal sample or two and a few breaks thrown in to chop it up a little.
    How great would it be if you could just think a job done eh? lol
    Cheers for feedback though man
     
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    the waveform on soundcloud would suggest your mixdown needs some attention, but other than that im quite feelin this, quite a dark vibe for jump up... its cool man :)
     
  10. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    more than a mixdown, getting rid of some elements like each 16 or 32bars. Won't let your ears breathe for a sec! haha

    lol just realized the tune's name btw!
     
  11. Sid Fidla James

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    lol. cheers guys.
    just to say again this is just the differnt ideas i had for the main part. finished tune wont be 5mins of same 16bar loop. lol. i prommise
    cheers again though for possitive feedback

    @Neomind - :p wonderd if you'd get the name