She Cried // Sad/Liquid kinda track from me!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by GiDriK, Jul 22, 2009.

  1. GiDriK

    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    MattDMA DnB Idiot

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    its pretty cool man...drums sound pretty good.... vocals bit wierd for me tho...
    but still (y) thumbs up innit
     
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    Really like it, not sure about the chopped up vocal sample but really like the second drop!

    Nice one
     
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    Yeh seems to me i need a better vocal sample..
     
  5. Dave Dexcell

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    BIG TUNE!!!!

    i like it alot good vybe to it, just loose the vocal as it is out of key with the tune and it spoils it

    Big up man well donr you have a banger here!
     
  6. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    like the way it starts the piano is really nice and the guitar stab that comes in every once so often is nice too. The way the strings filter up is luvley

    really liking build so far

    Not into having the kick drum build it up like that

    right drop, doesnt have enough impact and the bass is slightly out of key, you need to look at that

    sub should also be deeper

    i actually think the first part of the vocal is kool, but after you change the pitch its out of key. If you looked at it properly you could make that vocal work really well imo

    right onto drums......

    Thye have a nice layout and the idea is there, the mix on them needs sorting though.

    Kick n snare are there, but they are quite flimsy, they dont have enough weight behind them. How many layers u got on kick n snare?

    mate this could be really good if you looked at those which ive mentioned

    wicked writing man, jus fine tune it! ;)
     
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    Thank You Mr.Zeal :D
    Well there is only 1 kick and 2 snares : 1 is bottom freq without like any top so i added a second snare wich has only the top frequencies.
    Im really just a noob, maybe we could chat at AIM or smthing so u could point out some things, rly like this tune myself so i would appreciate the help.

    BTW : Rly was inspired by "Distance Between" :p
     
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    To Count T :

    Im gona try not to lose vocal, but fix it, couz i think vocalz add sum movement nshit :D
     
  9. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    Really like the intro.. piano is great.
    Agreed with the others about the chopped vocal- it just grates.
    Lovely outro.
    Good work!
     
  10. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    i really like this has got shit loads of potential i agree with count an zeal if u focus on the points mentioned then this tack could really be good all the ideas are there man, as you said dont lose the vocal but get it more in key it kinda feels like uve just slapped it in there for good measure? second drop gets a bit much aswell (vocal-wise) i like it tho man keep at it!!!
     
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    u got me mr.Sphinx :D
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    BUMP, Someone else maybe? :D