Shaymin - Life Long Struggle (demo)

[Blasék]

Hey,

I'm producing a brand new track! Here is a demo version of it:

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fjonesasd%2Fshaymin-life-long-struggle%2Fs-258M8

Let me know what you think about it? Criticism or any good feedback?

Appreciate it,

Joona

 

[hughhardiemusic]

fresh tune, intro is epic, bass and synths are dope. I like the snare sound, but if it were me i would lose those fill snares (the 2nd and 3rd ones between the main ones) and replace them with a different drum sound possibly from different break. so you'd have the main kick n snare going, boom bah...boom bah, which is the main driving force of the drums and then behind that is some lighter breaks giving it the rolling feel, if that makes any sense. Quality track tho, thats a preference thing

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fhugh-hardie%2Fhugh-hardie-closer

 

[Blasék]

Nice mate!

Yeah, totally agreed! Break would need some variations, different shuffles and something addictive percussions! Thanks a lot!

 

[Psychoholic]

Dope stuff mate, bass is big, you nailed the intro as well, not really feeling the bright percussion though I would make that deeper according to the track aswell, down pitched rimshots with reverb instead of a snare or whatever

Cheers.

 

[Blasék]

Thanks mate! Appreciate that idea! daaark mooods..

Drums updated!

 

[Silent Impact]

very clean, good job

 

[Blasék]

Thanks mate!

 

[subprime]

Like the drums as you have them now, tune sounds balanced. Perhaps just lacking that memorable riff or whatever to make it stick in the mind.

 

[Blasék]

Thank you!

Some kind of melody or addictive sound would be great, I have to try this one!

Cheers,

Joona

e. the latest version updated!

 

[ThePapa]

Is Joona a boys or a girls name?

 

[Blasék]

should be a boys name

 

[Blasék]

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fjonesasd%2Fshaymin-life-long-struggle

Finally ready! Free dl included.

 

[EvezDroppin]

sick rolling

 

[Blasék]

Nice to hear that, thanks !

 

[Psychoholic]

Nice mate, I like it !

 

[alcaponeuk]

sounds freshhhhh bro, very clean

 

[Blasék]

Thanks guys!

 

[D-Jhepz]

yeah i think those drums r sweet... nice sound and arrangement... stabs cud be more prominent in the tune i think...