Shadeslayer - Cyanide [Dubstep]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Shadeslayer, Oct 20, 2010.

  1. Shadeslayer

    Shadeslayer New Member

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    Thought I'd try something new. First try on Dubstep here, anyways comments/criticism/mindless rant welcome. ^ ^
     
  2. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    This is nice, really like the intro.
    In terms of musicly it's fine except i think soething need to be done with tht main synth, but thats just me, but i think some work production wise could benefit it alot.

    Any feedback on my latest post would be great!






    http://soundcloud.com/introspectdnb/introspect-digital-wip
     
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  3. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    feeling that intro piano, has a nice grainy quality to it, tho i think the notes could be more carefully spaced out to give it a nicer melody...

    beat sounds nice and solid, but feeling the low wobble is a bit too muddy, not really coming through properly mayb it needs to be high passed to seperate it from the sub a bit... sounds alot cleaner when it comes thru an octave up actually :) that piano does have a nice atmosphere, over all if i could give constructiv criticism i just personally feel that main wobble needs to be cleaned up or just made more smoother or prominent! feel free to return some feedback ;)
     
  4. Shadeslayer

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    Alright, thanks for the feedback, guys.

    Can't be arsed to work any more on this track (it pretty much wanted to deconstruct my laptop in the end), but at least now I know I'm not a lost cause to Dubstep. xD

    Cheers.
     
  5. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Where is the snare?
    You can barely hear it, the percussion is also a little lost in the background.
    Try to get those a bit more prominent and work a bit on cleaning up the wobble bassline.
     
  6. Shadeslayer

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    Will keep that in mind. Thanks.