dig the sample werks well -drums sound a little distorted and could use a bit of variation might want to change the bd build -transpose or pitch it
fx a bit piercing but sorted could be good
not bad for new to the game
keep em comin
sorry, will listen to your tune at some point.
some points to bear in mind;
If your drum sounds sound a bit thin or understated, try layering several drum hits together to fatten the sound.
Keep your samples,patches, hits organised in easy to find folders.
Bring the volume on your main mixer down and start quiet. When mixing down, raise the individual channels slowy till you get a good sound. Don't try to make tracks at max volume. This mistake i made.
(remember, the listener has a volume knob)
....sorry mate, i gotta go to work. will listen later.
hope this helps.