SERIOUSLY WOUNDED (wip)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Viperdnb, Jul 24, 2009.

  1. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    new tune on my myspace: www.myspace.com/viperdnb
    The samples from Half Life. :D
    I'd mainly like you to critisize the bassline as I tried something new, but w/e you think could do with shaping up is fine with me.
    BIG UP DNBFORUM:soap_box:
     
  2. MattDMA

    MattDMA DnB Idiot

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    "i seem to be seriously wounded..."

    that sample is premium (y)(y)
    bass needs little bit of work...dunno? it seems to dominate once it drops which kills it a little bit...mayb tone it down a litte? dunno?
     
  3. Viperdnb

    Viperdnb On his way.

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    When ever I do though it sounds too quiet, the high end of the bline anyway... you mean the low end?


    I played about with the tune some more from loop syndrome, theres a different version on my player now.