Sennon - Illusion

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sennon, Apr 2, 2011.

  1. Sennon

    Sennon New Member

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    My latest work, not fully mastered nor completed yet.

    Enjoy :)
     
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    Sunshaft New Member

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    drums are good, but intro was too long, and half of song was without bass. when bass comes in, it is better, but bass should have some high freq. too + high pitched catchy melody
     
  3. horace111

    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Main idea is good, Drums sound a bit like they are 'cut out of a loop' and could use some punch, but as you said, it ain't mastered yet.
    As said before the drop could use some more bass. I did like the part after 2:45 , i think it will sound great when it's mastered.
    Keep up the good work!
     
  4. Sennon

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    The bass frequency is low, I know, but I changed it now (ain't uploaded)

    Also the drumloop is custom made. Could eq the kick/snare more so it sounds better
     
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    mixdown. your drums sound pretty flat to me bruv, bring them forward in the mix and extenuate the prominent frequncies such as 90-100 hz on the kick and around 250-350hz on the snare make your drums stick out and try messing around with a compresser on your snare to make the attack harder. cant really hear your snare atall atm and it needs to be sharper, compression is a double edge sword, you can flatten a sound to shit or you can make it stick out. push threshold up and the range down. hope that helps
     
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    what lucid said
     
  7. Sennon

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