Seiber- The candy man

[Barnzee]

http://soundcloud.com/seiber/the-candy-man

Check it out

 

[luciduk]

punctuated ideas man; this gives me the image of that really freaky clown that kinda scares you, like an eery fun fair. The beats are punctuacted and you have structure, but i feel like this could be filled out more in the drum department, maybe hi hats or shakers, the bass is definatly there also but it needs to be slightly more defined. still a very conceptual piece of music and comes accross very clearly but some things need to be cleared more and some need to be brought through more you know?

 

[Barnzee]

yeh i have real problems with mixing down. Im working on it buddy

 

[Mr Fletch]

I agree with Lucid, you got some real nice ideas there. That bassline is stonking (IMO) but like lucid said, needs some definition. Drums would sound cool if they were a little more "hectic". Shakers, shuffles, rim shots, bongo's etc etc in the back to fill it out a little maybe.