Second attempt!

[RELEASE]

Second month into producing from not knowing a thing, second track!
I know the mixdown is out, and it's a few things but I can't pinpoint what.. Any suggestions? On the mixdown or anything else about it? Criticise away, good, bad or ugly!

 

[sam the dnb man]

I'm not a fan of the vocals, sorry.
I think they would sound better if sung in a higher register & sat slightly further back in the mix.

 

[RELEASE]

I'm not a fan of the vocals, sorry.
I think they would sound better if sung in a higher register & sat slightly further back in the mix.

Thanks! I was thinking they are a bit too prominent, I could sink them back a bit. Singing a bit higher may be a problem though, I have a very deep/low toned voice and struggle to sing much higher, and I absolutely refuse to use auto tune!
Thanks for the feedback though, I shall take it into consideration.