The snare is sounding nice and the kick is nice too but the treble is a bit too sharp and resonant it sounds a bit like a bell. The drums need more variation i think. The bass is not sounding quite right but the noise you have got would be solid for further processing. It needs more focus on the low end and maybe you could try and move the mid range resonance you have a bit lower to emphasise the low bass more. Or put a sub underneath. It is a simple wobble throughout the track which you could automate more. The synths you have in the first half work better than the ones in the second half but they are all too basic at the moment. I like the drawing.