Scratching my head over this tune

[blend107]

Hey guys,
Yet again within my productions I have begun questioning myself over a tune. I would greatly appreciate it if anyone could listen to me and give me some tips / pointers about where to go with it.
I feel that it becomes a bit too much in parts. It's unfinished so the breakdown doesn't sound too great but I've tried to switch things up in the second drop to change it up a bit.
Any help would be great! (can't seem to embed for some reason)
soundcloud.com/subdivisiondnb/phu/s-KqWU9
Thanks

 

[TinnitusD&B]

Its not a bad tube mate but for me personally i'm not to keen on tracks that go into a two step pattern. If you want to intensify the drop or other parts of the track it just needs some more FX/samples thrown into it.