DnB Scrapped - Run! (2nd Drum and Bass tune in Aeolian Minor)

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Hey Boards!


I managed to finish my 2nd ever drum and bass tune ever in the past week after recovering from the flu. I got some great feedback on my last track so I figured I'd post up another! I would love to get your feedback


Simple chords etc and I did use a sample for the drum percussion

https://soundcloud.com/scrapped%2Frun-1st-edit-2nd-dnb-tune-in

Ive had issues with the bass because of soundcloud but I hope you get the idea.

 

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Ahh bugger. Wrong section again!!


Please move this to the subforum if you can Admins

 

[spyre]

The break is cool

 

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Cheers bro... What you reckon I should change? ive only been at this for a short while

 

[chulishih1984]

by rubbing a piece of cardboard against martijn's ass and recording

 

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^^ I may get my field recorder and see what happens.




Anyone have any idea's on how I could improve?

 

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is it that bad?