Scatcat - Rattlesnake (WIP) - Questions & Feedback

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Scatcat, Apr 4, 2011.

  1. Scatcat

    Scatcat It don't mean shit

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    Safe guys,

    This is the first production I have gotten anywhere near to finishing but I'm a little bit stuck.

    I can already hear a shitload of problems, but identifying them is always much easier than fixing :D

    Any feedback would be sexual.





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    How do I make the 2 basslines flow into each other better at 5.53

    Also am I riht in thinking that I spend too long progressing through the track, needs to be squashed a bit?
     
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  2. Scatcat

    Scatcat It don't mean shit

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    Scatcat It don't mean shit

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    it's good man. I just started trying to produce myself so I'm of no help when it comes to that side of things, but I think there's some potential here, especially if it's one of your first tunes. Good job staying away from shit, screechy sounds you tend to hear alot of these days, and yes, imo you could shorten the 2nd half a bit or something to avoid it sounding to repetetive,

    having that said, I have only listened on my shit laptop speakers, so i'll try and give it a listen on some decent speakers tomorrow
     
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    Feelin this man:) But its abit too repetitiv and feels empty at times