I like the switch at 1:06 but I think this should have been extended to 32 bars.
The musical elements you have throughout the track are nice like the vocals and pads and keys but the drums are a bit boring for my liking and sound like a sample pack loop but if you made them yourself they sound nice although the drum fill is a bit quiet. The reese bass is a bit plain like one long drone note with no movement but maybe that is the liquid style.
I think the mix is nice but maybe some more bass but it could be youtube.
I agree the atmosphere and music is really cool, but the drums are letting you down. The drums work better with the neuro section but they don't fit the liquid section and I agree the neuro section should have been lasted longer.