sake - blow the doors off [WIP] (jump up) / sake soundcloud

groelle

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updated the soundcloud with a new jump up beat. comes in pretty sick, but somethings defo missing. maybe some fx? would like to hear your opinion.

apart from that theres the full version of "bout the money" and the finished "summertime blues" aswell as my first bootleg of a reggae tune called eye above me.

your time would be very appreciated, as serious feedback is highly needed! tell me what i can improve on my tracks! ;)
 

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Yeah somethings not quite there. For me the bass is a bit subdued.
And the snare is rubbish. Harsh, sorry, but I just think it's spread too wide, there's not enough snap and too much tail/noise. Change the snare!
IMHO ;)
 

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For me the bass is a bit subdued.
And the snare is rubbish. Harsh, sorry, but I just think it's spread too wide, there's not enough snap and too much tail/noise. Change the snare!
IMHO ;)
what do you mean by "subdued"?

maybe ill try to change the snare aswell. hm.
 
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