S.P.Y - Dusty Fingers (Caaza Remix)

[Caaza]

Entering a Hospital Records remix comp, would love feedback on how the track sounds at this moment a time. This is a work in progress, so just looking for general feedback

https://soundcloud.com/caaza/dusty-fingers-remix/s-DiLum

 

[Solace]

It sounds to verby now. Those stabs are with reverb, the vocal too, and the bass is quite wide too I have to feeling..
Those stabs need some work, some of them seem to be out of tune.. And for my taste they can be louder. The bass needs work, it sound to monotone now
Just giving some advice, and what comes to mind...