Drum & Bass `ry4n - Transfer [Neurofunk]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by `ry4ndnb, Jun 7, 2012.

  1. `ry4ndnb

    `ry4ndnb Member

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    Hi, my 1st DnB track ever, need some advices and feedback ;)

    youtube.com/watch?v=kSwns--tZU4
    soundcloud.com/ry4ndnb/
     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    intro is pretty basic, that cymbal needs some delays, and some atmospheric sounds morphing in the background. that volume change before the drop doesnt sit well at all either, bass is ok, but very basic and repetative. This is ok as a basic start, but you need loads more automations on various filters and FX, a more thumping, rolling drum beat, and a hell of a lot more change ups to make it interesting.
     
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    Ok, I`ll do something with that in next few days ;)
     
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    Yeah not bad buddy! Drums need work overall, they just sound a bit amateur, no worries though EVERYONE always has these sorts of drums when they start out. All about finding the right samples :)

    I was impressed with your bass for a first blast! I wouldn't have been able to make something like that when I started out, probably would take me a while now tbh, I ain't great at making moving basslines! But yeah, definitely needs some variation :)

    Keep it up though bud, off to a good start!