Drum & Bass `ry4n - SummerTime [FINISHED] =D

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by `ry4ndnb, Aug 6, 2012.

  1. `ry4ndnb

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    fuk yea, can`t be worse haha
     
  2. `ry4ndnb

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    fu ck, why anyone do not comment here? when the fresh threads has some replies, I have nothing.. why ?
     
  3. djSing

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    Some nice ideas but the track doesnt really flow. I may be wrong but it sounds disjointed because you keep jumping in and out of different keys.. the notes for the different instruments don't work with each other. One thing that is promising is the beat.. it sounds really clean, you could add a little variation to it and that would help keep it interesting.

    There are many sites like this one which give you the notes and chords which belong in a key. You should always stick to 1 key for a song
     
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    Staying in key is huge, it can make a great track turn to shit in seconds..
     
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    Hi, thanks for replies. I have checked your site, but for now I haven`t any time to research it, but thx for sharing ;). For the notes, I was trying to make it sound good (for me ofc), but I haven`t thinking about working with other notes, it seems to be a piece of sh.. :D I`ll trying to understand it. For the drums, I was working hard on them, so thanks for noticing it! :)
     
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    Sorry I'm not feeling this, the percussion is good but the melodic elements are not doing it for me.