RVerbal - Memories [ATMO DNB]

[greyson]

hi
here's my new atmo dnb track
I hope you like it

https://soundcloud.com/rverbal%2Frverbal-memories

 

[megagnome]

Hey Greyson,

this kind of DnB really isn't my style. I like what you did with the percussion, though. Unfortunately the main melody doesn't please my ears. It does sound a little bit cheap in my opinion. Maybe alternating the instruments and adding a little bit of variety to the melody would help, but i don't know.

I'm sorry if that sounded a little bit harsh, but again that's just not my kind of music.

 

[hibrow]

Hi Greyson,

I think you're onto something with this track, loving the bassline. There's a couple of things I would advise but this is only my personal opinion. I'm no expert! I like your minimal style percussion with the rim shots etc but there's a really high click in there that I find off putting. I always find that the real hi-band clicks detract from a tune, like having a rattle on a speaker. I also have to agree with megagnome on the main melody. It doesn't seem to fit. Maybe try something different there.

Still, keep up the good work mate.