RVerbal - Memories [ATMO DNB]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by greyson, Jan 23, 2012.

  1. greyson

    greyson VERBAL CITY

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    hi
    here's my new atmo dnb track
    I hope you like it :)



     
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  2. megagnome

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    Hey Greyson,

    this kind of DnB really isn't my style. I like what you did with the percussion, though. Unfortunately the main melody doesn't please my ears. It does sound a little bit cheap in my opinion. Maybe alternating the instruments and adding a little bit of variety to the melody would help, but i don't know.

    I'm sorry if that sounded a little bit harsh, but again that's just not my kind of music.
     
  3. hibrow

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    Hi Greyson,

    I think you're onto something with this track, loving the bassline. There's a couple of things I would advise but this is only my personal opinion. I'm no expert! I like your minimal style percussion with the rim shots etc but there's a really high click in there that I find off putting. I always find that the real hi-band clicks detract from a tune, like having a rattle on a speaker. I also have to agree with megagnome on the main melody. It doesn't seem to fit. Maybe try something different there.

    Still, keep up the good work mate.