it aint about readin sum1ns comments before listenin to a tune lol the only thing i focused on was the amens lol overal good tune i would think about tryin it wiv maybe a different break somethin more percussion-y, the breakdown was good an the vocal is fat. not sure about the flute needs a bit more eq'in too. like the ideas tho man good work keep at it! peace!
i rly enjoyed this mate
the beats could use some additional work to sound better in the mix, some variations would be nice. another beat wouldn't be misplaced at all i think. some nice drumroll edit always works aswell
the vocal doesnt seem right at some points, maybe pitch it higher and take individual words or phrases instead of the entire sample.
other than that i must say it has great potential, keep at it man!