wow man this is great. what more do you want to do with it since you labeled it as a wip? I wouldn't change anything. Personally I like long atmospheric breaks and your strings are really nice. I think the vox or vocals you had toward the end plus your stings and the sub would make a great breakdown
Thanks very much. TBF I'm not changing a great deal, for the 2nd drop I have another 2 sitar samples to change it up a bit and that bit with breakdown could work!