Right, I finally got your track from Mesh and had a listen.
I like the track. The components work well together and it flows through nicely. I think that the orchestral parts are a tiny bit out of key, but I like that as it gives the track a druggy kinda of feel and complements the bassline in a strage kinda way.
However I think that some part are still a little rough, like the pads in the intro could use some subtle filtering and some reverb to take the sharpness out of it. I like the break but feel that it needs some high freqs added, because it sounds a little muddy beneath the bassline.
The main thing that I noticed was that the track was a little sparce. I think some more stabs, bleeps, etc kinda of fx are needed to make the track stand out more and reinforce the key components of the tune.