robthetrustysteed - Whiterob is on a New Year Holiday

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by whiterob81, Jan 3, 2012.

  1. whiterob81

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    Hey mate,

    Try beefing up the strings by having more layers of them, especially in the mid range (I can hear a low range one kind of? but the high part overpowers).

    Also, vary up your beat structures? or maybe have breaks sooner on than the spaceout section to interrupt the repetition.
     
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    try cutting up ur high end break to match ur low end break, right now i think theyre both different so your losing the groove in the track.
    plus i think ur high end break is a lil ear piercing at times imo
     
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    Thanks lads, very much appreciated. I'll have a look at the high end break and see if i can do something with it and I'll try beefing up the strings a bit
     
  5. logikz

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    interesting drum sound, keep it up. make your own sound happen. you should statistically write something really good in about a year if you keep at it, such is my estimation.
     
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    Thanks logikz. Very kind words indeed. Always appreciated.