Drum & Bass Robby Hyper --- Brainbug ALL FEEDBACK NEEDED PLEASE

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  1. RobbyHyper

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    left you a comment on ur soundcloud mate. but ill say it here aswell, i think some tamba, hi hat shaker loop would go well in the middle parts.
     
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    Nice melody, i dig the string work, but ur drums definitely lack something and sound repetative, maybe throw a high-passed break in there or another percussive element, also some percussion/drum pattern changes wouldn't be bad to keep it interesting. Also the wobble has too long attack (for my liking that is). And it would sound better if u introduce some new element in the 2nd part, maybe another synth, some drum changes or slight change in melody, or maybe remove the wobble for a few bars, cuz as it is the 2nd part is just the 1st one copynpasted.
     
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    Cheers for the feedback I'm gonna have another final look at this do il take everything into consideration!! Also got some vocals to put on it too!! Cheers
     
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    Drums are souding crisp. Needs more sub bass, strings are really nice melody bit more vairation with some fills would be good
     
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    Cheers man much appreciated :)
     
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    Don't forget to check out a few other peoples tracks mate there's loads of new material posted by peeps this week that are all interested in what you think so check em out when u get time :)