rob del terror - linkest week (WIP)

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  1. rob_del_terror

    rob_del_terror - ̿ ̿'̵͇̿̿з=(•̪●)=ε

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    been workin on this for a few days.
    i could just do with a bit of outside input as to getting a better overall sound. it only goes as far as the second drop and i intend to do more with it. just got mental blockage on atm so gonna concentrate on improving the sound that is already there.
    usin fruity loops, i know my way around the program, just not the best way to improve the sound quality.
    constructive criticism more than welcome.
    peace.

    http://soundcloud.com/rob-del-terror/linkest-week
     
  2. ChunkyNorritz

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    I like it. Maybe the low end could do with a bit more grunt...

    Love the acidish lead line.
     
  3. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    That 'ding dong' is my text alert sound. I checked my phone twice during that tune.
    Good sounds, no guts. That would be my over-all impression. Get some punch in your drums for the drops.
    Could have been a bit nasty, but wasn't quite there. That's my feedback.
     
  4. rob_del_terror

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    cheers ears. all taken on board. like i say it is work in progress so i'll bare that all in mind when i carry on with it. thankyou kindly.
     
  5. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Screw you and that damn doorbell sound!!!!!!! LOL!

    That is the exact same sound my doorbell makes! I actually paused the track, went downstairs and opened my bloody door when I heard that! Only to realise it was on the damn track lol!
     
  6. rob_del_terror

    rob_del_terror - ̿ ̿'̵͇̿̿з=(•̪●)=ε

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    haha.

    did you walk off stage when anne robinson told you??? :teef:
     
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    No I followed her off stage and showed her my wrongest streak.........
     
  8. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Love the BASS. 1:25!!!

    Love the Acidic Bass also.

    The drums are hittin nicely for me in my cheap headphones... I'm picturing the track being limited and how jammin this'd be in terms of loudness. The balance sounds good so far.

    The one thing I would do is add a lot more misc Percussion.


    Hey, I'll limit this badboy for you if you're interested, free of course.... also, once you're done, if you want someone elses take on it, I'd love to play around with these sounds and do a rmx.
     
  9. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    http://nuskoolbreaks.us/temp stuff/Into Oblivion Tests/

    listen to 'test 1'


    When I say, "The one thing I would do is add a lot more misc Percussion.".... just to give an example... :D

    It's a personal preference of mine to have lots of little sounds that compliment the main Hat riffs.
     
  10. rob_del_terror

    rob_del_terror - ̿ ̿'̵͇̿̿з=(•̪●)=ε

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    yeah no probs. once again thanks for the feedback. it's all done on fruity, i can send you a zipped loop package if you like.
    if your not using fruity i'll turn it into some kind of sample pack.
     
  11. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    As long as the pack contains 44.1/16 Wavs, I'm good to go :clown:


    I'd love to have a go at it - make me a pack and I'll tear it up!