REVO< / No Refuge / DnB / final master ???

[Over]

Hi to very1,
this is my real first attempt to make Dnb in a proper way....
any suggestion about mistake on master eq, or progression, or anything will be more then wellcome.
take care
PEACE !
Ps: bit rate 1411/sample rate 44khz/16 bit/ around 172.07 bpm

https://soundcloud.com/overandracerx%2Fno-refuge

 

[Nautilus]

I can't comment too much, since this isn't my style. The drums seem a bit empty and hollow if you are trying to go for jungle, not sure if its the hats.

 

[Over]

thanks let see what will happens, i will try to make a new track using this noise and break..more hh and let see....