Retinal - outlook producer comp entry

[Stiffer]

easy all,
was just after a bit of feedback on this one whilst i still have time to iron out any problems, so as much critical feedback as possible please chaps

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fretinal%2Fretinal

 

[Nucleoid]

Fucking pretty intro, when the drums come in. Maybe put a super subtle sweep or fx automation over the bit before the drums though, it's a pretty long 8 bars of just a pad and 2 cymbals..

I think the cymbal at 0:50 or smth could be a bit lower in volume, don't worry, we'll hear it. At 1:30 it starts again.. I like tha panning tho
That little plucks at 1:45 are awesome, I wouldn't mind them a little bit louder in stead of the cymbals

The main part with the dnb reminds me of InDivision, pretty awesome

 

[Stiffer]

cheers for the feedback mate!