Okay the intro starts too empty I think, maybe throw a big crash on the first note and add some atmospheric sounds on the background to fill it up.
The drums itself sound nice, like the bass riser in the intro, but don't like the gated notes afterwards, sound too simple too me
Throw on some reverb on some of the mid bass sounds, they sound a little too dry.
The FX crash/downsweep @ 0:45 is a little too loud in the mix as well as the vocal that follows right afterwards.
From the drop on to the end I think it is all way too simple, hoped that a switch-up was going to happen but you just go on with the dry sounds.
So try working on widening your sounds and adding subtle reverb to them. Should sound better!
I like the drum work in the intro, but that riser is a little too dry for my taste, as is the synth and bass. Needs some fluctuations in filter movement and such. Everything just sounds too dry. Add some reverb to some bits.
Nice ideas tho
lol yeah sorry dude.
Ok, you bass (along with some other sounds) are just really dry, and dont have much movement to them, like every stab is the same, following so far? Either automate a lowpass filter on every say 8th or 16th bar to add a bit of subtle movement.
Alternatively try having a slow attack and medium release on a stab on every 1 and 8 bars or so.
Just keeps things interesting , so it doesnt go stale too quickly for the listener.
http://www.looperman.com/acapellas....po=&ord=date&dir=DESC&Search=Search+AcapellasThis is FUN!!! Where'd that vocal come from? Is that you? Love the Bit Decimation on it.
Dang... 1:05 I wasn't expecting the lead to go there... not my cup, way too happy sounding.
I really enjoyed the edits on the Lead in the intro, but once the tune 'goes off', it went in a direction that I'm not enjoying. Cool patch though, the sound is cool, it's mainly the sequence you chose (the notes).
I'm not hearing any bass on my cheap comp speaks... just put the headphones on... ahh, now I can hear the sub... it's really light though... sounds about 2-4 DB too low... I can hardly hear it in the headphones. Overall, the track is too happy for me, but I like the vocal snippet a lot... I'd love to play with it and make something dark with it (wish my setup was working).