Rec - Spectate The Desolation (WIP)

[Rec]

Hi! I'v been working on a new track and would like some feedback or just general opinions on what I'v currently have and some thoughts on how I can further improve it.

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Frec-12%2Fspectate-the-desolation-textbounce%2Fs-QiR22

Thanks for your time.

 

[Solace]

first thing i hear is the snare... for me, it doenst sound alright. what I would do: get a real snappy one, bring it to the front.
work a bit on the mixdown, some things sound to loud.. i can't really put my finger on it...
but i like the idea though, i like the intro and the build-up!