Some interesting musical ideas here. Can't say I enjoy the piece but some elements of this could certainly be used in other productions, it's always worth exploring the weird and the wonderful. The last phrase is particularly refreshing lol.
woah... i dont know where the fuck i am in this.... but strangely enough i like parts of this song like around 1.24... i just wished it gelled a bit more... interesting song tho!
I do like chiptune, but there are 2 problems here.
The mixdown and the scales, most of elements aren't playing in the same note, plus sick arps you have there and ideas... work on it bro, make it big