really proud of this tune so far, i'd love some critical feedback

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  1. W3st

    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    Hey guys been a while. i'm trying my hand at a remix comp to get myself back into the producing routine.

    Heres the track so far, don't mind the super long intro, it's a work in progress.





    And for anyone interested, here is the remix link: http://www.remixcomps.com/contest/astronaut-remix-contest-0

    cheers!
     
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    BattleteK Active Member

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    nice dancefloor vibe :))
     
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    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    cheers thanks for the feedback mate!
     
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    i'd use a snare with more body and one that is less sharp for this kind of tune (think pendulum, camo & krooked when they made the cheesy stuff, and maybe a bit more reverb)

    otherwise sounding good on my end
     
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    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    cheers cele thanks for the input - unfortuneately i submitted but ill work on it forthe next tune!

    fixed the link for any other listeners
     
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    Agreed with this :)
     
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    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    cheers mason, i guess i gotta up the punch haha.
     
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    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    bump, anyone else?