really proud of this tune so far, i'd love some critical feedback

[W3st]

Hey guys been a while. i'm trying my hand at a remix comp to get myself back into the producing routine.

Heres the track so far, don't mind the super long intro, it's a work in progress.

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fw3st_official%2Fastronaut-rain-w3st-remix

And for anyone interested, here is the remix link: http://www.remixcomps.com/contest/astronaut-remix-contest-0

cheers!

 

[BattleteK]

nice dancefloor vibe )

 

[W3st]

cheers thanks for the feedback mate!

 

[cele]

i'd use a snare with more body and one that is less sharp for this kind of tune (think pendulum, camo & krooked when they made the cheesy stuff, and maybe a bit more reverb)

otherwise sounding good on my end

 

[W3st]

cheers cele thanks for the input - unfortuneately i submitted but ill work on it forthe next tune!

fixed the link for any other listeners

 

[Mason John]

i'd use a snare with more body and one that is less sharp for this kind of tune (think pendulum, camo & krooked when they made the cheesy stuff, and maybe a bit more reverb)

otherwise sounding good on my end

Agreed with this

 

[W3st]

cheers mason, i guess i gotta up the punch haha.

 

[W3st]

bump, anyone else?