Rate my new dark liquid tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by graffitizax, Jul 15, 2013.

  1. graffitizax

    graffitizax Hauntr

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    sup people made a new tune would love some feedback

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  2. Yukon

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    Definitely a smooth tune!
    but im not too sure of the chords @ ~1:41 onwards, personally it kind of ruined the dark/deep vibe but overall you delivered, some nice production you got going.
    Keep it up m8
     
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    graffitizax Hauntr

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    thanks for the reply mate, definately hear what your saying about 1:41 was unsure about that whole part but felt like i needed a way to change it up a bit
     
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    nukleamojo Producer & Blogger Super Joshi

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    Smooth as a dnb baby's bottom. I agree with Yukon about the change a little bit. I feel it works and takes the tune to a different place. I think a diff instrument/sound may have worked better there.
     
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    fredehhh New Member

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    very good, i would lower the volume and then sharply rise it just before the drop. give it that swoop in effect. magic
     
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    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    i like it, very atmospheric. vocal is sick as well. great work! maybe a few drum edits here and there?
     
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