Rate my new dark liquid tune

[graffitizax]

sup people made a new tune would love some feedback

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fzachary-gray-3%2Fi-know-who-you-are

safe

 

[Yukon]

Definitely a smooth tune!
but im not too sure of the chords @ ~1:41 onwards, personally it kind of ruined the dark/deep vibe but overall you delivered, some nice production you got going.
Keep it up m8

 

[graffitizax]

Definitely a smooth tune!
but im not too sure of the chords @ ~1:41 onwards, personally it kind of ruined the dark/deep vibe but overall you delivered, some nice production you got going.
Keep it up m8

thanks for the reply mate, definately hear what your saying about 1:41 was unsure about that whole part but felt like i needed a way to change it up a bit

 

[nukleamojo]

Smooth as a dnb baby's bottom. I agree with Yukon about the change a little bit. I feel it works and takes the tune to a different place. I think a diff instrument/sound may have worked better there.

 

[fredehhh]

very good, i would lower the volume and then sharply rise it just before the drop. give it that swoop in effect. magic

 

[DjCartel]

i like it, very atmospheric. vocal is sick as well. great work! maybe a few drum edits here and there?