Rate my Break :)

Discussion in 'Production' started by elmaruk, Jan 9, 2011.

  1. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    YO!

    Could just do with a few tips on how my beats are sounding and if theres anything more i could be doing to improve them!

    cheers!

     
  2. CH3SH

    CH3SH CH3SH - Naphalm Audio

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    A low pitched congo with a short release would sit nicely under all that ;)
     
  3. RevTech

    RevTech Butthole=output transduce

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    I can hear the layers in the snares, and one of them has a longer release than the others, cut that up. Also, maybe put an envelope on the snare of one snares so only the attack of one is heard. Sick break btw
     
  4. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    cheers guys ill try them out!
     
  5. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    got good punch to it and a sparkly high end. im listening on earbuds but its nice. artistically its got nothing to catch my interest, its about as creative as the house 4x4 kick with an open hihat between
     
  6. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    haha yeah fair point, its pretty basic
     
  7. wackybacky

    wackybacky New Member

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    Perfect for an intro mate. well done.
     
  8. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    I think the snare is a lot clearer than the kick fatten the kick some more, and in the second part, I'm not feeling the high end, doesn't blends that well with the kick and snare.