Drum & Bass RATAone - Rabid Dogz

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by RATAone, Feb 3, 2014.

  1. RATAone

    RATAone New Member

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    Hello there. So this the track i've been working on. The problem i have is i always seem to run out of ideas, and all my tracks are really short. i'm looking for feedback and tips on how to improve my structuring. Anyway, here it it (pelase be brutally honest).
     
  2. Norax

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    Ok if you want brutal critique, here it comes: The hats at the very beginning are too sharp and don't go well with rest... the kick and snare are too plain-sounding The drop itself is funky, would sound 5x better with different samples though (plus actual impact which is lacking for all of the track). The atmosphere is getting really nice with 1:00. Remember smaller variations to keep the track interesting; the bass is too repetetive for example. Oh and I expected a redrop of the bass at 1:54...

    Hmm so yeah :D
     
  3. RATAone

    RATAone New Member

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    Thank you very much. That was amazingly helpfull, drop a link if you want my feedback on any of your stuff.

    Cheers.