q-brick - Alani // new tune, steppin,minimal,neuro

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  1. GiDriK

    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    Q-Brick - Alani


    It started as my submission to a samplepack competition on one forum, then i though i should finish it. And this is actually what i came up with. Just so tired, dont think im gona do anything more with it, if you like it i will give you 320 mp3 of it. thanks, any kind of comments are welcome:wave:

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    sounds big for a "mess". think the mixdown needs some more work and this would be a banger!

    and that pic is fucking funny aswell :D
     
  3. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Yeah I'm liking this. And for a "mess" it sounds damn good!

    I think groelle is right about the mixdown, things need to "seperate" a little more, but apart from that it's pretty bangin!
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    im too detached from this track now..


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    I'm not good enough to comment on the mixdown so I won't, but your work on the synths and growls is top class. You use a lot of clicks and background sounds which really work and I like the portamento on the pads. Its definitely got huge potential to come back to later with a fresh mind if you're bored of it right now. I like the rest of your stuff on soundcloud too bud.
     
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    liking this mate, would be good to hear the finished article, loving that gritty synth, got that tech sound down to a tee

    good track man big ups :boxing:
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    Actually its unmixed at all rly :p Thanks man!

    Awwwyeeah
     
  8. BOS

    BOS What Darkness Hides

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    feeling the melodic elements, going to keep tuned ;)
     
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    maybe a little lack of cohesion but i really like it.
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    yes yes keep an eye out mate, tnx :twisted:
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    never heard that word be4 :p
     
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    means something like that not all elements fit together that well. like its some red line missing which leads through the tune.
     
  13. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    sounds pretty dirt mate your gettin there man! not sure about the saw thing in triplets or summin, happens immediatly after the drop (0.34ish) an then again a few times more thru the track, an was the only thing that stuck out as bein a bit shabby. does add to the flow of the tune but not realy feelin the sound of it. good work tho man thats the only thing i felt lettin it down a bit. not drastically lol just personal preference i spose?
    Really feelin that clouds remix btw the vocal is dreamy :D
    Safety!
     
  14. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    not bad man not bad

    defo getting there with your writing man

    Mixdown needs some work but if ur tired of the tune then best to move on and take what you learnt from thissun!

    keep it up bro
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    Thanx everyone, suprised that a shity tune gets more feedback than a good one :p
     
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    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    sods farkin law!!
     
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    GiDriK Lost in jungle

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    spot on, by the way, dont wanna create another thread so i post here. I have another project "Indivision" on http://www.myspace.com/indivisiondnb
    theres 2 track up, wat u think yall>