Pushing my creativity on this one, still a WIP though..

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ARTFX, Feb 24, 2011.

  1. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Amongst all the 'Seba - Painted Sky' remixes I thought let's do a new tune again. :D

    So yeah I been working on this for some days now. Kinda like the bass already! I want to add some more metallic sounding screeching sounds on top of it probably.
    I still intend to change up the choir cause I don't think this one sounds that realistic, but it is to lay down the basic idea.

    Let's see what you guys think of it.

     
  2. Nautilus

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    The intro honestly sounds like you are about to start up a jumpstyle tune. I think the bass needs a small mix up part that really briefly goes to a deep wobble. every 16th bar or so. heavy.
     
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    nice wobbles :D i like it !!
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Thanks, anyone able to give some more feedback?
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Nice intro sounds but they become a little muffled when the beat kicks in, maybe a little light compression can help that. Great filthy bassline you got going on there, me likes!

    I think it could do with a subtle riser or impact on the breakdown, to me it just kinda cuts out without warning, but the breakdown is very nice. As for the choir, I quite like it, it kinda works well with the atmospheres.....

    Good track mate, I enjoyed it.
     
  6. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Funny because I personally think this is far from finished.
    Got like a dozen of ideas still floating around in my brain, trying to find their way out of jail.

    About the intro sound, do you mean compression on the drums or on the intro sound?
     
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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    sounds ok to me
    good drum pattern! =)
    gj
     
  8. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Possibly compression on the intro sound. It just fades a tiny bit once the drums kick in.....nothing major, barely noticable if I'm honest.

    Oh, and get those ideas outta jail lol! I'm looking forward to hearing the finished piece!
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Hmmm gonna try that tomorrow, just came back from a beatbox jam session. :D
    So now I'm gonna get some sleep, totally smoked out at the moment.
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Any more feedback?
     
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    I like the intro. It's a bit mysterious atmosphere around, that's nice. With the bells and stuff. Drop is nice man, like the bass sound u use. So, good job me think!
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Thanks mate!
    Every little piece of feedback is helpful at the moment! :D
     
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    Nice man loving the rhythm of this:)
     
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    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Okay thanks, maybe I'll drop an update tonight, if I can get the new elements right that is.