PTEC - ELECTRO HOUSE TUNE - Need some feedback!

[TongueFlap]

First electro house tune that I have attempted. Still rough and a work in prog

Would love some feedback on this little clip.

https://soundcloud.com/ptec%2Fptec-complextro-clip

 

[subprime]

Some low end bass to give it some weight maybe? Agree with Marlock on soundcloud that it sounds like an intro at the minute. Should be a good one when it's done tho.

 

[TongueFlap]

Cheers for the feedback chaps! Yeh it's trial and error at the moment as I have no clue about writing electro. Will post an update soon.

 

[MARKLAR]

just write it like u would a dnb track fuck if its not the way an electro shud be its hte way ur electro tune shud be!lol
theres no rules unless u wanna makes embers breaks