Drum & Bass Psychoholic - Wanna

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Psychoholic, Oct 17, 2012.

  1. Psychoholic

    Psychoholic Quantum Cunt

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    Hi Guys,

    A new track I have been working for a while now wan't to finish it soon and i'd love some feedback on this and on how to make this track a proper one!
    So any idea's feedback and whatever everything is appreciated :)



    Cheerz
     
  2. pattycake

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    interesting choice of sounds unusual vibes but i like it keep working on it!
     
  3. Psychoholic

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    Thanks pattycake I guess i'm just an unconventional fucker then ;)
     
  4. jimjimjim

    jimjimjim oldskool

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    ello m8
    i like where youre going with this - the vocals really fit.
    im not that keen on the wobble the whole way through the track tho - think you need to vary that up a bit to add more structure/interest to the tune.
    maybe drop it out for a bit - bring it back in - or screw around with the rate more
    apart from that sounding good m8
    peace.
     
  5. Grindlefly

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    This is interesting, im liking the vibe, it reminds me of playing games on my Atari ST many years ago lol
     
  6. lasiien

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    I like it, but it is very retro :) Kepp going psy I like your stuff :D
     
  7. Psychoholic

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    Alright thanks, that is sound advise (pun intended) I'll definitely try do get some variation in the wobble.

    Thanks! Although I am not sure whether I should like the fact of it being compared to a Atari ST audiotrack ;)

    Thanks for the compliment mate, I'm not planning on stopping anytime soon because otherwise than mastrubating I don't have that much at hand (pun intended again OMG I'm so fucking hilarious, kill me).
     
  8. JimpaDirt

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    As mentioned by the others, interesting sounds. But more variation wouldn't hurt and that goes for both the melodies and the bass. Perhaps hit a different note every now and then. Im liking the feel to it tho and as jim said, the vox fits nicely!
     
  9. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    That wobble just seems to come out of nowhere, work on building up to it, lead the listener into the next part of the track, imagine it as a journey from start to end. Agree with the others that it needs some variation withing the wobble, and the melodies. Nice retro sounds tho!