Protocol 7 - Untitled WIP (Tear It Apart Plese!)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Protocol 7, Jun 22, 2011.

  1. Protocol 7

    Protocol 7 New Member

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    Hey guys, this is one of my current WIPs, I would love some feedbak and critisism.

    As you can see its not anywhere near completion but the section I have uploaded is nearing completion. (Im thinking its a bit long though)

    Let me know what you think, thanks a lot.

     
  2. Carlo lepore

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    heavy tune mate maybe more of a dramtic intro nice minimal flow
     
  3. Protocol 7

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    Thanks, yeah should of poointed out the intro and break arent done yet, just has the atmos playing :p
     
  4. Protocol 7

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    Hey guys, track has been updated quite a bit, feedback is more than welcome :)

     
  5. dj cluster

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    need a stronger drop and more variation; nice synt ;)
     
  6. Protocol 7

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    Thanks, I will lok at mixing it up a a litte :)
     
  7. Ghosthack

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    Nice clean sound quality, some parts are maybe a way to montone.
    Bassdrum is a bit to weak, but overall its a solid tune x)

    Is your artist name inspired by Serial Experiments Lain?
     
  8. ~CriticalWaves~

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    Really dig your snare on this man. and the movement is nice!
     
  9. Protocol 7

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    Thanks for the feedback guys its much appreciated, will havea little work on the bass drum and will try adding a little extra to help keep it fresh.

    Am going to look at starting a second to go with it over the weekend to create a release for it :)

    @Ghosthack, nah I chose it as everything in live (most) has a protocol on how to do things, I am using the name ironicly cause in music, everything is free from rules!
     
  10. Nautilus

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    get those drums next level. They are way too boring, add some true variant percussion in there!