Project 7 - Error (WIP) (Feedback welcome)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Project 7, Apr 16, 2011.

  1. Project 7

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    Hey guys,

    New Work In Progress from me. Decided to take one of my early tracks and develop it further, so far I am liking it but it still needs more. LEt me know what you think, all feedback is welcome either here or on the time line.

    Ignore the initial drums, they will be removed / changed later :)




    Thank you :)


    PS. Fishy, do not worry I havnt forgotten you, everything is a bit hectic at the mo :p
     
  2. paracyte

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    intro does not fit with what's comin after drop,
    same in 1:16, 1:38, and so on when parts are changing
    I think it might be a large note key difference or just
    changes happening to sudden.
    both parts (the smooth one and the hard one)
    are ok but it just doesn't fit together.
    also there is a little if no changes in the
    parts so it's getting pretty boring.
    I think you have to re-think the build up.
    Cheers.
     
  3. TetraEleven

    TetraEleven Producer/Idiot Savant

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    Yeah, the build-up doesn't totally fit in with the drop, and the changes from the hard to the softer parts are a little sudden.

    BUT, I thought the "hard" part was awesome! Hell, even the softer part was good too, it's just that I don't think they totally belong together.

    So don't get me wrong, I can tell it took a lot of talent to make this track, there's just a couple of things I would change. Also, it's still a WIP, so hell, it can only get even better from here. :D