Project 7 - Downfall (WIP) Feedback welcome

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  1. Project 7

    Project 7 Member

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    Hey guys,

    New song im working on, some feedback would be greatly appreciated as its work in progress so changes are welcome.



    Thanks.
     
  2. jimjimjim

    jimjimjim oldskool

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    nice production !
    that bass in the 1st and last sections is well tasty !!
    good job
     
  3. luciduk

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    some real nasty basses in there. bad! but i think the drums could be stronger personally, they could do being more solid and sharper attacks and such, in my opinion. nice tune man
     
  4. Fishy:)

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    Nice intro man:) and the bass is sick as fuck!
    agree with lucid tho, these drums is weak, ur snare is like beeing slapped by a 5 year old when it should sound like a bearpunch.. lol
     
  5. Project 7

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    Thanks for the feedback guys, yeah i loved creating that bass, was lots of fun.

    I have updated the drums a little so have a listen:



    I am going to work on it properly tomorow evening to try and get it finished up.

    Thanks for the feedback so far, any more is welcome.
     
  6. barnesy00

    barnesy00 DJZeroZero

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    pretty interesting, must of took a wile to make the bassline, agreed about the drums
     
  7. Project 7

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    Gonna have a look at it this evening, thinking of splitting the mid section off completely and using it in an entirely new track as it has potential but cant be fully utilised within this one.
     
  8. Project 7

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    Project is now complete, let me know what you all think.

    Thanks.

    PS. Comments on the timeline are also appreciated greatly :)

     
  9. Wilf_UK

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    Really like the bass when it kicks back in at 2:17. The knocking noise. Is it a kick? Not too sure about that. Apart part that I like it.(y)
     
  10. Project 7

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    Its actualy a 3rd bass layer, without it that section becomes incredibly repetitive and it also links in with the build up within that section. Maybe i can reduce its level a bit and see what its like then.

    Thanks for the feedback.
     
  11. p1n

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    awesome stuff man, but the drums ruin it for me. They are too flat and imo dont have enough decay to them. Now I think its not your fault you just used dodgy samples and tried to make them good, my advice is to get rid of the drum samples and try to get some tasty new ones and this track would be really good. I know it's hard to rework the drums after so many listens as it just wont feel natural when you do replace them, but give it a day or two and I promise when youll find the nice deep drums that this track deserves you'll be really happy.

    keep up the good work ! :)
     
  12. Project 7

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    Thanks p1n, yeah i know what you mean but do not fear, the mastered version on my EP has a deeper drum overlaying the one you can hear now, makes it sound a lot more solid.
     
  13. p1n

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    good to hear! :D Is it available anywhere for a listen?
     
  14. Project 7

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    Not at the moment, everything is going through varification for the release, will be availbale soon though ;)