Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by stoneagepl, Mar 19, 2013.
hi there, got some fresh flesh, feedback would be cool thnx
i see where you wanna go with this, the basslines dont work for me at all though (especially the on at the drop), id totally get rid of the synth in the intro. drums sound better to me. mixdown could be improved (lead-bass sounds too loud). at 1.51 the bassline becomes more interesting, maybe keep those lines in and get rid of the stuff before (imo)? then you could rearrange the tune because it could turn out much better imo. song-structure is right for me, overall its like i just get what you wanna say with the song, keep up working on it and you will make me also agree on it rspct
ty for good review, you are pretty much right ) i will rearrange tune and also will fix the synth i mean try to make it sounds more interesting. maybe it is possible to do more with this material cheers
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