It was good; I enjoyed the bass the most. One thing, was it was kind of quiet; I guess you'll take care of that during mixing/mastering. Anyway, the drums and bass sit well together. You also have some good ambient vocal samples. Now all you need is something to fill in the mid/mid-highs a bit and I think you'll be ready to fill it out as a song.
The only other thing is I wonder if the lead-in/build-up at the beginning needs to go on as long; either shorten or add something for more interest (like bring in a higher-frequency voice).
@Circuit Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated!
@kdk The intro does go on to be fair. The drums at the beginning are there for dj'in purposes really (even though the actually track may never get mixed by a dj, but it's all good practice I guess!) But yh, listening back the intro does sound kinda boring. Thanks for the feedback.