Pretty new to producing, first "complete" DnB tune

[pottsy22]

Have been producing properly for a couple of months, did a fair bit of dabbling before but nothing meaningful.
Made this in the last few days, would be great to get any feedback
Im pretty happy with it considering im still a massive noob!

http://soundcloud.com/dj-monty-p/thwip-v2

 

[barnesy00]

Mate this is sick for your 1st tune, keep it up, id say the drums need to be stronger, jst later another kick and snare underneath maybe, also could do with some drum edits to keep it interesting. cant really comment on the bass as im listening on headphones but sounding sweet man. check out my stuff see what you think ive only been producing under a year too
http://soundcloud.com/zerozero00

 

[Fishy:)]

Ye man this is good for a first tune! first thing tho those hats are waaay too loud

 

[pottsy22]

cheers for the feedback guys!

loving some of your tunes zerozero big up!